The Bishop and Other Stories

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The Bishop, The Letter, Easter Eve, A Nightmare, The Murder, Uprooted, The Steppe.

Lyn Amos
GASPING FOR AIR
08 Mar 2024
Found this book to be exceptional, the ordinary aspects of life explored as I have never seen before. This is a book that I will re read a number of times, leaving some time between each. Thank you very much for sharing it.
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deansdii marevesa
Gasping for air
18 Jul 2022
Fascinating. T'ws a cool read. U nid 2 hv mvd fast into raw sex and make the book steam from the beginning till u conclude ‼️
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Francesca Ristagno
In serious need of a proofread
06 Mar 2022
Apart from the fact that I wouldn't consider this book as "erotica" but rather "romance" with adult language, it is full of spelling mistakes (especially "your" instead of "you're" and every other sentence a word is missing. I'm also finding the story rather slow.
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Sam Hawthorne

10 Mar 2022
Critical feedback is welcome and will help guide other potential readers as to what to expect. Regarding the proofreading - sadly the publish-for-free model doesn't justify investment in professional services! My DIY job was obviously not as good as I'd hoped, but I will redo this (with the help of Grammarly, but not a Reedsy freelancer) and upload an updated version of the novel soon.
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Sam Hawthorne

31 Mar 2022
Following further checks and corrections, an updated version of the book has now been uploaded. It is however still essentially as before, just patiently making its way to the more intimate scenes.
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Francesca Ristagno
Slow-going and in need of improvement
05 Mar 2022
This is not what I expected in the erotica section, at least not the hot and steamy kind. It would be more accurately defined "romance". Furthermore, there are lots of spelling mistakes and words missing. It needs to be seriously proof-read.
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