I want to send you a free gift! One that will immediately put money in your pocket!
But first, let me say thank you for being such a good client of mine. Because you are a good client, I have a very special FREE gift for you.
You see, like every successful business owner, I want more clients. As you know, we offer top quality business information.
This is why I’ve attached a coupon to this letter. Complete a coupon with your friends, neighbors, associates, and co-workers information. Send the completed coupon to me, and I will send them my sales information. For every friend (who is not an existing client) who orders one of my products or services, I’ll send you $10.00 in cash!
This is just like putting money in your pocket!The more people you refer to me who are not already existing customers, the more free money I’ll give you. It’s that simple.
But there is one “catch.” You MUST fill in the line at the bottom of the coupon where it says “Current Client,” with your information. This way, I’ll know where to send your cash.
Once again, thanks for being my client! My staff and I really appreciate your business!
Sincerely yours,
Richard Payne
PS Remember, the more people you refer the more FREE cash you will receive. Just be sure to fill out your name and address, clearly, on the bottom of each coupon, where it says “Current Client,” so that I know where to send your cash. To make sure you remember, why don’t you write your name and address on the line that says “Current Client” at the bottom of the coupon right now.
Earn $10 on every client you send me when they place an order!Note: The coupon below is a sample offer. Feel free to use it as a template for your offer, and remove this line.
When the person you recommend orders any product or service from me, you will receive $10! You can recommend 1 or 1000 people it doesn’t matter how many. When they buy one of my products or services you’ll receive $10 in cold hard cash! Just complete the coupon, as outlined, (copies are fine) and mail it to me, and I’ll send them out my sales information. I’ll know that you recommended them to me, and send you the $10 when they order. If you have any questions just call, or FAX me.
Now You Can Make $10 Every Time You Send Me A New Referral That Buys One Of My Products or Services!I am willing to help you earn some extra cash, dear friend, by giving you $10 for every new referral that you send me when they purchase any one of my products or services! Many of my clients say that my business products and services are the best of their kind in the world.
This special offer is good for brand new, 1st time customers. Just mail this coupon to me and please enter your name and address on the line that says “Current Client” below with the information about your referral(s) on the “New Client” line. This way, I will make sure you get your $10. I am looking forward to welcoming your referral(s) to our large and growing family of satisfied clients, and sending you your cash!
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________ New Client (clearly print) First Name Last Name Street Address City, State, ZipNote: We reserve the right to cancel this offer at any time. First come first served. Mail or Fax this completed coupon to Richard Payne, 13170-B Central Ave. SE, Suite 300, Albuquerque, NM 87123. Phone: 505-888-1597 I will send them my product information immediately, and send you $10 immediately when they order any one of my products or services!
(Offer B) The following letter and coupon lends itself more to retail or service businesses.